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the girl who sees fat
in all the wrong places
and wishes for a way
to eliminate it quickly

the boy who strayed
popping pills like candy
nearly drowning in sorrow
and creating a single red line

the girl who feels deformed
no matter what you see in her
how lovely she truly is
she's convinced it's all lies

the boy who has to hide himself
and holds more secrets than you know
but let's me see inside his heart
and stays strong for us both

the girl who just wants love
but keeps doing it the wrong way
she may not see it but i can
and she needs help before it's too late

cry for us, strangers to you
but not to others
for we are the young ones
suffering in silence
begging to be heard
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:iconthoughtful-obadiah:
I've met a lot of people like these! Your words really do capture the heart of their struggles well done.
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Ladiphly Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2017  Hobbyist
i like it
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rufflesfirefly Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2017
this is one of the most beautiful things i read. i love it
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Beatles7 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
.....
I totally relate.
Beautiful.

I respect this.
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NaniWrite Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
<3
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Malaxy97 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014
Truly beautiful...<3
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EagleEyes00 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ma feels,so beautiful
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brOKen-Mayhem17 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013
Truly inspiring :)
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gaurdianangel5 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013
this was an incredible poem~
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emraldwolf Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:'( This is soo true it make me want to cry!
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:iconretizent:
Retizent Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
very true. :nod:
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fionafirefox Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It's amazing, out of all of my friends I seem the happiest, and it's true that I just use my happiness as a mask to hide my opinions and such. I finally made friends that understand that, and I've opened up to them. I hope that I don't lose them in the crowd like I did to many friends last year, they seem more special to me.

This poem is beautiful, it's worded perfectly. <3
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RevoltingChaos Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist
Very good. :heart:
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SoulLostInTheMoment Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012
Oh my god I almost cried. :'| So true. Well done !
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this-is-a-paradox Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012  Student Artist
Aww, this is sad.
The message of this poem kind of reminds me of "We Wear the Mask" by Paul Lawrence Dunbar, which I had to analyze for a project.
I like this a lot.
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willyamPax Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
wonderful...
its really true
that
some people
Suffer in silence
hiding in ever smile
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Tearsofblood33 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012
Gorgeous, and so true.
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rvish Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
beautifull poem
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PleasurelyPainful Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012
thanks ,33
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Roselyna Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
that really is so true the people that looks the happiest is the one that hides behind a mask. You just inspired me to do a drawing thnks
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:iconinsanity-fox:
Insanity-Fox Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2012
Biting back tears
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oODarkLunaOo Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2011
Wow how nice! Vevyr beautiful!
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PleasurelyPainful Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2011
Thank you!
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:iconcharanty:
Charanty Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2011
Touching, very touching.
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:iconpleasurelypainful:
PleasurelyPainful Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2011
Thank you <3
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:iconcharanty:
Charanty Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2011
WElcome)
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controleater Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2011   Writer
This is truly beautiful. I think we can all relate to these people at one point or another. :heart:
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:iconpleasurelypainful:
PleasurelyPainful Featured By Owner May 1, 2011
Thank you so much <33
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:iconcontroleater:
controleater Featured By Owner May 6, 2011   Writer
ur welcome.
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Jaderen123 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2011  Student Writer
So true in to many ways to count. And that makes it evermore the tradgedy
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FFairyy Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
amazing. ♥♥♥
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PleasurelyPainful Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2011
thanks<3
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Tsuki-Tai Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2011  Student Writer
Beautiful
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:iconpleasurelypainful:
PleasurelyPainful Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2011
Thank you <3
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WH1T3-N0153 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2011
The philosophy and everything in this is quite beautiful. I love pieces along these lines, that show all these different lives and experiences. It's very cool.
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PleasurelyPainful Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2011
Thank you very much <3
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WH1T3-N0153 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2011
So very welcome.
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thelovelyfulsarah Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2011
I'm in love with this piece. It kind of reminds of the song "Bleed Like Me" by Garbage.
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:iconpleasurelypainful:
PleasurelyPainful Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2011
thank you so much <3
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:iconthelovelyfulsarah:
thelovelyfulsarah Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2011
You are welcome!
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broken-voices Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2011  Student Writer
All I to say is "wow, im speechless." this is really amazing
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:iconpleasurelypainful:
PleasurelyPainful Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2011
thank you very much! <3
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xSatansxRagdollx Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
this is so beautiful and so true
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PleasurelyPainful Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2011
thank you love! <3
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impaledbycats13 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2011
i love this poem
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:iconpleasurelypainful:
PleasurelyPainful Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2011
thank you! <3
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impaledbycats13 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2011
ur welcome:)
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athenaaqua Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful.
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