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When The Morning Comes

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Baby, don't cry
Hold me tight
Stay like this all night
I'll be alright…

When the morning comes

Look into each other's eyes
Count all the colors in yours
As you listen to my slow sighs
I'll be alright…

When the morning comes

Hushed 'I Love You's
Slow Kiss
Soft Lips
Baby, I'll be alright…

When the morning comes

Soft yellows and pinks
Shine through the window
Onto our sheets
Baby, I'm alright…

Morning's come~
Just a little something I came up with a couple days ago~

I like it alot and I think it all flows pretty nicely.

Hope you guys all like it too C:
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midnight-music's avatar
"Count all the colors in yours" is a brilliant line. Wonderfully written, well done...you manage to make it sweet and loving, yet not too overpowering.